Songwriting

Anaphora, Contrast, Alliteration, Assonance and Consonance

Garnish Music Production School·November 10, 2024

Lyrics are sung, not read. How words sound matters as much as what they mean, and a handful of devices borrowed from poetry give you control over that sound. Used well, they make lines more musical, more memorable and more emotional.

Anaphora

Anaphora repeats the same word or phrase at the start of successive lines.

I remember the station, I remember the rain, I remember the train pulling out.

It creates rhythm, builds intensity with each repeat, and gives the listener something to hold on to. It is one of the most common devices in choruses, protest songs and speeches - and it makes a line easy to sing back.

Its cousin, epistrophe, repeats at the end of lines instead. Titles often work this way: every line of the chorus ends on the title.

Use anaphora to build. Three repetitions is a classic number: the third lands hardest.

Contrast

Contrast puts opposites side by side: light and dark, hot and cold, staying and leaving, then and now.

You were the fire, I was the flood.

Contrast creates tension and clarity at the same time. It is especially powerful in choruses and in the relationship between sections: a verse about the past and a chorus about the present, a verse that whispers and a chorus that shouts.

You can contrast within a line, between lines, between verse and chorus, or between the lyric and the music - a cheerful melody under a heartbreaking lyric.

Alliteration

Alliteration repeats the same consonant sound at the start of nearby words.

Silver streets and sleepless summer.

It makes phrases stick and gives them a rhythmic snap. Hard consonants (b, d, k, p, t) sound punchy and percussive; soft ones (l, m, n, s) sound smooth and flowing. Choose the sound that suits the emotion.

Use it lightly. A line where every word starts with the same letter sounds like a tongue twister.

Assonance

Assonance repeats vowel sounds inside nearby words, regardless of the consonants.

Lonely road, holding on, so cold.

Assonance is the secret glue of singable lyrics. Because singers sustain vowels, repeated vowel sounds make a line flow beautifully when sung - and they create near-rhymes that feel natural rather than forced. Many of the best "rhymes" in modern songs are really assonance.

Consonance

Consonance repeats consonant sounds anywhere in nearby words, especially at the ends.

Lost and left, the last of it.

It adds texture and rhythm without the obviousness of rhyme, and it is particularly useful in rap and spoken-word delivery, where consonants carry the rhythm.

Using them together

These devices work best layered and invisible. A listener should not notice the alliteration - they should just find the line unusually satisfying to sing. When you edit a lyric, read it aloud and listen for places where the sound could do more work: a vowel that could echo the one before, a consonant that could repeat, a line that could start the same way as the last.

Do this now

  • Write a chorus that uses anaphora on three lines, with the third line breaking the pattern.
  • Write two lines that set opposites against each other.
  • Take a verse you have written and revise it for sound: add one example each of alliteration, assonance and consonance without changing the meaning.
  • Sing the result. Which device made the biggest difference when sung?